For This week’s
reading task, I was assigned to peer review work produced by two of my other classmates.
The work assigned to review is for the
Game book we are creating as a class. Each class member is assigned a subtopic within
a chapter and is tasked with writing about that subtopic based on the research
collected over the past few weeks
The class was assigned triads for commenting, the two triads I was assigned to comment on were as follows:
What is a game?
/Brief History of Games by Jurate
Why people
Play Games- by Christopher
To see my
comments on my team members work you can click here.
The comments
I received from my classmates were quite useful, it was mentioned that they liked
the style of the academic writing and found it to be appropriate for the chapter
being discussed. They also mentioned the adequate use of citations throughout
the text. One piece of constructive criticism that I was able to gain from my
peers was my sentence structure. Some of the sentences were too long and difficult
to read. Moving forward I plan to implement these changes to my chapter to
allow for an easier reading experience.
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